Based on my last assignment, I received positive feedback on my opening, data and idea while receiving constructive criticism on my camera angle and stance. Next time, it seems as though I need to place my camera higher and look at the “audience” directly at eye-level instead of looking down on them. I’m glad this peer pointed this out because it’s something that I failed to register previously. Those who left feedback on my elevator pitch also commented on how I remembered to add an opening hook to grab the audience’s attention and also mentioned good use of data in my presentation.
Due to misreading the instructions, I used the same elevator pitch because I read, “Same as last time,” which I now realize was a mistake. However, as noted before, I would definitely need to change my camera positioning. I would also need to memorize my pitch more seamlessly upon rewatching.
Monday, July 6, 2020
17A: Elevator Pitch 2
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Hi Jung!
ReplyDeleteI remember commenting on your first elevator pitch saying how good it was! And for this video you did improve the angle! I know it is so hard to find a good angle to perform the elevator pitch because nothing seems to be as tall as us. Overall great elevator pitch!
Jung,
ReplyDeleteYou made great progress from the first elevator pitch! The camera angle is definitely hard to figure out, I have a hard time as well with that. Opening hooks are great when presenting your elevator pitch, that initial grab will grab the audience's attention right off the bat.
Jung,
ReplyDeleteI loved your elevator pitch number 1 and your elevator pitch number two was even better! You went about your pitch in a unique way which proved to be very effective. Great work. Your opening was definitely attracting my attention as well.
Hi Jung, this pitch was even better than your last one! I like the original way in which you provided the audience with information and hypotheticals. Definitely a more attention-grabbing pitch with a great explanation.
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